What is your favorite movie and why is that your favorite?

2022-02-16 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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Recently, I saw movie Chicago. I fell in love since I saw Cell Block Tango in Chicago. So I wanted to see the movie and I saw that on last Sunday. It didn\'t make me disappointed. The movie was directed wonderfully and the story was so interesting!

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


Recently, I saw movie Chicago. 

>> Recently, I saw the movie Chicago. 

I fell in love since I saw Cell Block Tango in Chicago. 

>> CORRECT!

So I wanted to see the movie and I saw that on last Sunday. 

>> So I wanted to see that movie and I saw it last Sunday. 

It didn\'t make me disappointed. 

>> It didn\'t disappoint me. 

The movie was directed wonderfully and the story was so interesting!

>> CORRECT!

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