What is your favorite movie/book character? Describe him/her as detailed as you can.
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I like watching romantic comedy movies, but I don't like any actors.
But there is only one person I admire.
I read her autobiography.
She is a figure skater and her name is Kim Yu-na.
It has been ten years since I liked her.
She gives me a lot of inspiration and courage.
The reason why she is great is that Korea is not a figure-leading country.
It was ony recognized by ability and became the best in the world. After each competition, Judgements changed the rules to disadvantage to Kim Yu-na in Japan, which sponsors many World Ice Federations.
She has overcome such unreasonable situations and has continued to the Olympic champion in 2010.
She is not only a sports player but also a modest character.
She has a humble personality and donates a lot to help people in need. I want to raise my daughter as a great person like her.
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I like watching romantic comedy movies, but I don\'t like any actors.
>>I like watching romantic comedy movies but I don\'t have favorite actors.
But there is only one person I admire.
But there is only one person I admire.
>>correct
I read her autobiography.
I read her autobiography.
>>correct
She is a figure skater and her name is Kim Yu-na.
>>correct
It has been ten years since I liked her.
>>correct
She gives me a lot of inspiration and courage.
>>correct
The reason why she is great is that Korea is not a figure-leading country.
>>correct
It was only recognized by ability and became the best in the world.
>>correct
After each competition, Judgement changed the rules to disadvantage to Kim Yu-na in Japan, which sponsors many World Ice Federations.
She has overcome such unreasonable situations and has continued to the Olympic championship in 2010.
She has overcome such unreasonable situations and has continued to the Olympic championship in 2010.
>>correct
She is not only a sports player but also a modest character.
>>She is not only a sport player but she is also modest.
She has a humble personality and donates a lot to help people in need.
>>correct
I want to raise my daughter as a great person like her.
>>correct
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