What is your favorite movie? Describe it in detail and why you like it.
학생이 쓴 원문
my favorite movie is Three Idiots. It was published in 2009 in india. I saw this movie first time in my middle school, my age 15. when i saw this movie im so moved. because the movie tell us \"Do what you want!\". And you know, honestly i hate indi movie before, because the dance and music every scene. but 3idiot dance and songs are not that bad. and also it has humor and fun too. so i love it!
강사 첨삭
Hello Robin!
There are many things you still need to improve in your grammar. Try to follow the suggested patterns. Check your verb tenses too. ^^
~T. Maine
>>My favorite movie is entitled Three Idiots.
It was published in 2009 in india.
>> It was published in 2009 in India.
I saw this movie first time in my middle school, my age 15.
>>I saw this movie for the first time in middle school when I was 15 years old.
when i saw this movie im so moved. because the movie tell us \"Do what you want!\".
>> When I saw this movie, I was so moved because the movie told us to do what we want.
And you know, honestly i hate indi movie before, because the dance and music every scene.
>>And honestly, I hate Indie movies before because of the musical scenes.
but 3idiot dance and songs are not that bad.
>> But Three Idiots\' dances and songs are not that bad.
and also it has humor and fun too. so i love it!
>> In addition, it also has some humor, so I love it!
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