What is your favorite movie? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite movie is Avengers. Because it\'s so interesting and awesome. This movie has many characters. Some of them isn\'t a human. But they can speak human\'s language. It is funny to analyze the characters. And my favorite character is Rokki. I think he has so much humanity. More over he looks so nice. So I like Rokki and the actor too. Someday, I would like to meet him. Because I\'m so big fan.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cindy!
Thank you for writing about your favorite movie. Please read your mistakes and follow the corrections given. ^^
~T. Maine
My favorite movie is Avengers.
>>Correct.
Because it\'s so interesting and awesome.
>>It is because it\'s so interesting and awesome.
This movie has many characters.
>>Correct.
Some of them isn\'t a human.
>>Some of them aren\'t humans.
But they can
speak human\'s language.
>>Correct.
>>OR: They can speak like humans.
It is funny to analyze the characters.
>>Correct.
And my
favorite character is Rokki.
>>And my favorite character is Loki.
I think he has so much humanity.
>>Correct.
More over
he looks so nice.
>>Moreover, he looks so nice and adorable.
So I like Rokki and the actor too.
>>So I like Loki and the actor too.
Someday, I would
like to meet him.
>>Correct.
Because I\'m so big fan.
>>I am such a big fan of him.
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