What is your favorite park and why?
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My favorite park is Dream Forest in North Seoul.
Because there is mini playground.
And there is a walking trails too.
And also benches, parking lot.
This is my favorite park.
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My favorite park is Dream Forest in North Seoul.
Because there is mini playground.
And there is a walking trails too.
And also benches, parking lot.
This is my favorite park.
Because there is mini playground.
And there is a walking trails too.
And also benches, parking lot.
This is my favorite park.
>> My favorite park is Dream Forest in North Seoul because there is a mini playground and there is a walking trails too. And also benches and parking lot. This is my favorite park.
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