What is your favorite part of weddings?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, if I understand about this question correctly, I\'d like to mention of my life as a partner with my husband rather than talking of the most favorite part of wedding ceremony.
To be honest, after marriage, my life has changed a lot in many ways. I have to take care of my son and there is no free time at all.
That\'s why I want to run away somewhere sometimes. However, the most favorite thing of my weddings that I want to talk is to have my own family by my decision. What I mean is that it is impossible to decide my parents, relatives and siblings by myself. Yet, I chose my husband as well as we had our boy with an earnest prayer. For this reason, I am a lot of responsibilities to them and it is one of my pleasures.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!
I really like how you answered this question. Marriage is a transformative act, changing the way two people look at each other, at the future, and at their roles in society. Married people are both responsible for one another, and both halves of that dynamic lead the married to live more responsible, fruitful, and satisfying lives for themselves and for their children.
Wedding is only the beginning of lifelong marriage and the later needs consistent care and inspiration to last forever.
Your answer presents depth and accuracy. Kindly read the suggestions and pay close attention to the patterns.
You have done a great job. See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>> Well, if I understand this question correctly, I\'d like to mention my life as a partner with my husband rather than talking about the most favorite part of wedding ceremony.
To be honest, after marriage, my life has changed a lot in many ways. I have to take care of my son and there is no free time at all.
To be honest, after marriage, my life has changed a lot in many ways. I have to take care of my son and there is no free time at all.
>> Correct!
That\'s why I want to run away somewhere sometimes.
>> Correct!
However, the most favorite thing of my weddings that I want to talk is to have my own family by my decision.
>> Correct!
What I mean is that it is impossible to decide my parents, relatives and siblings by myself.
>> What I mean is that it is impossible to decide for my parents, relatives, and siblings by myself.
Yet, I chose my husband as well as we had our boy with an earnest prayer.
>> Correct!
For this reason, I am a lot of responsibilities to them and it is one of my pleasures.
>> For this reason, I have a lot of responsibilities to them and it is one of my pleasures.
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