What is your favorite part of where you live?
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My favorite part of where I live is that there is pretty much everything we need for lives in the complex of my apartment. There are many kinds of restaurants, a lot of cafes, supermarkets, grocery stores, toy stores, hair salons, almost kinds of hospitals, clothing stores, a pet shop, a spa, even all kinds of academy so I don’ have to go far. There’s really nothing what we don’ have. I can go anywhere I need in 5minutes. It is super convenient and amazing.
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My favorite part of where I live is that there is pretty much everything
we need for lives in the complex of my apartment. There are many kinds
of restaurants, a lot of cafes, supermarkets, grocery stores, toy
stores, hair salons, almost kinds of hospitals, clothing stores, a pet
shop, a spa, even all kinds of academy so I don’ have to go far. There’s
really nothing what we don’ have. I can go anywhere I need in 5minutes.
It is super convenient and amazing.
>> My favorite part of where I live is that there is pretty much everything
we need for our lives in the complex of my apartment. There are many kinds
of restaurants, a lot of cafes, supermarkets, grocery stores, toy
stores, hair salons, almost different kinds of hospitals, clothing stores, a pet
shop, a spa, even all kinds of academy so I don’ have to go far. There’s
really nothing that we don’t have. I can go anywhere in 5minutes.
It is super convenient and amazing.
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