What is your favorite place and why is it your favorite?

2018-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Hi teacher Dianne. I'm so sorry for my absent today. As you think, I fell asleep that time. To get your call, I usually turn on the bell but yesterday I forgot. I'll try not forget. Anyway, here's the answer today's homework. My first favorite place is my room. My room is not clean but I've been live there for 25 years. When I'm in my room, I feel relaxed and cosy. My second favorite place is my boyfriend's house. I live in the city but my boyfriend live in the countryside. It's very calm and natural.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!


I understand. Sometimes, we tend to forget things. ^^

Anyway, I hope you\'re having a good day.

Here\'s the correction I made.

See you tomorrow!


_Teacher Dianne


Hi Teacher Dianne.
>> correct


 I\'m so sorry for my absent today.

>> I\'m so sorry for my absence today.

>> Or: I\'m so sorry for being absent today.
 As you think, I fell asleep that time.

>> correct

>> Or: As you were thinking, I was still sleeping at that time.
 To get your call, I usually turn on the bell but yesterday I forgot.

>> To get your call, I usually turn on the alarm, but yesterday I forgot it.
 I\'ll try not forget.

>> correct

>> Or: I\'ll try not forget next time.

 Anyway, here\'s the answer today\'s homework.
>>
Anyway, here\'s the answer for today\'s homework.


 My first favorite place is my room.

>> correct
 My room is not clean but I\'ve been live there for 25 years.

>>  My room is not clean, but I\'ve been living there for 25 years.
 When I\'m in my room, I feel relaxed and cosy.

>> When I\'m in my room, I feel relaxed and cozy.

>> or: When I\'m in my room, I feel relaxed because it\'s cozy.
 My second favorite place is my boyfriend\'s house.

>> correct
 I live in the city but my boyfriend live in the countryside.

>>  I live in the city, but my boyfriend lives in the countryside.
 It\'s very calm and natural.

>> correct

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