What is your favorite place and why is it your favorite?
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강사 첨삭
Hi, Jane!
I understand. Sometimes, we tend to forget things. ^^
Anyway, I hope you\'re having a good day.
Here\'s the correction I made.
See you tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne
Hi Teacher Dianne.
>> correct
I\'m so sorry for my absent today.
>> I\'m so sorry for my absence today.
>> Or: I\'m so sorry for being absent today.
As you think, I fell asleep that time.
>> correct
>> Or: As you were thinking, I was still sleeping at that time.
To get your call, I usually turn on the bell but yesterday I forgot.
>> To get your call, I usually turn on the alarm, but yesterday I forgot it.
I\'ll try not forget.
>> correct
>> Or: I\'ll try not forget next time.
Anyway, here\'s the answer today\'s homework.
>> Anyway, here\'s the answer for today\'s homework.
My first favorite place is my room.
>> correct
My room is not clean but I\'ve been live there for 25 years.
>> My room is not clean, but I\'ve been living there for 25 years.
When I\'m in my room, I feel relaxed and cosy.
>> When I\'m in my room, I feel relaxed and cozy.
>> or: When I\'m in my room, I feel relaxed because it\'s cozy.
My second favorite place is my boyfriend\'s house.
>> correct
I live in the city but my boyfriend live in the countryside.
>> I live in the city, but my boyfriend lives in the countryside.
It\'s very calm and natural.
>> correct
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