What is your favorite place in Korea, and why?
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It\'s a park in my hometown. I used to walk around there with my ex-girlfriends. There are the fountain, futsal place, and one thing that I\'d love to recommend a place. There is hill to see the sunset. So, I still remember glowing with the setting sun with girlfriends. I don\'t know if it\'s still there, I want to visit there again with my future wife. :)
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It\'s a park in my hometown.
>>> CORRECT.
I used to walk around there with my ex-girlfriends.
>>> CORRECT.
There are the fountain, futsal place, and one thing that I\'d love to recommend a place.
>>> There is the fountain, the futsal place, and one place that I\'d love to recommend.
There is hill to see the sunset.
>>> There is a hill to see the sunset.
So, I still remember glowing with the setting sun with girlfriends.
>>> CORRECT.
I don\'t know if it\'s still there, I want to visit there again with my future wife.
>>> I don\'t know if it\'s still there, but I want to visit there again with my future wife.
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