What is your favorite place in Korea that was built for someone? Tell me about it.
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was student, a lot of shool had a few statue. The statue was built to commemorate great man\'s. My school had statue of king sejong and Admiral yi sun-shin. These days all most school didn\'t have it. I didn\'t know where these statue gone.
Our city have a small park, there is statue, it was built to commemorate March first independ movement. People these days don\'t care these monument. I want that young people can remember our painful history.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]!
Thank you for sharing this, and it is interesting to know that your country values the contribution of every individual. See you in class!
Aki~
When I was student, a lot of shool had a few statue.
>>> When I was a student, many schools had statues..
The statue was built to commemorate great man\'s.
>>> The statue was built to commemorate a great person.
My school had statue of king sejong and Admiral yi sun-shin.
>>> My school had a statue of King Sejong and Admiral Yi Sun-sin.
These days all most school didn\'t have it.
>>> These days, most schools don\'t have it.
I didn\'t know where these statue gone.
>>> I didn\'t know where these statues had gone.
Our city have a small park, there is statue, it was built to commemorate March first independ movement.
>>> Our city has a small park, there is a statue, it was built to commemorate the March First independence movement.
People these days don\'t care these monument.
>>> People these days don\'t care about these monuments.
I want that young people can remember our painful history.
>>> I want young people can remember our painful history.
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