What is your favorite place in your city and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite place in my city is Kyung-Bok Palace. It is quite beautiful and huge. There are many spots to take pictures. When I visit this place, I feel like a princess who lives in the place. If I have a chance, I would like to go there again.
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Hi [이름]:)
The Kyung-bok Palace is actually a crowd pleaser. A lot of tourists usually go here when they visit South Korea. Foreigners can also have the chance to wear traditional clothes here to complete South Korean trip.
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-Teacher EliseMy favorite place in my city is Kyung-Bok Palace.
> My favorite place in my city is the Kyung-Bok Palace.
It is quite beautiful and huge.
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There are many spots to take pictures.
>> There are many spots to take pictures there.
When I visit this place, I feel like a princess who lives in the place.
>> CORRECT
If I have a chance, I would like to go there again.
>> CORRECT
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