What is your favorite place in your city and why?
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My favorite place is my room and Starbucks Cafe and coin singing room.
I like to be alone and have my personal time because I am free. So I like to stay at home and watch Netflix.
Second place is Cafe. In my hometown there are lots of brand Cafe, STARBUCKS. ANGELINUS. CAFFEEBEAN and so on.
I usually study at cafe. I can more concentrate on something in the condition of a little noise.
Last place I like is a sining room. In Korea there a place called coin singing room which
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Those are great places. You can find peace in each one. I like going to those places too. :)
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Before answering the question, I want to say thank u and get impressed from your sincere feedback of last class.
>> Before answering this question, I want to say thank you and I am impressed with your sincere feedback from our last class.
My favorite place is my room and Starbucks Cafe and coin singing room.
>> My favorite place is my room, Starbucks Cafés and karaokes.
I like to be alone and have my personal time because I am free. So I like to stay at home and watch Netflix.
>> I like to be alone and have my personal time because I feel free. So I like to stay at home and watch on Netflix.
Second place is Cafe. In my hometown there are lots of brand Cafe, STARBUCKS. ANGELINUS. CAFFEEBEAN and so on.
>> The second place is the cade. In my hometown, there are a lot of cafes like Starbucks, Angelinus, Caffeebean, and so on.
I usually study at cafe.
>> I usually study at a café.
I can more concentrate on something in the condition of a little noise.
>> I can concentrate more one something with little noise around me.
Last place I like is a sining room. In Korea there a place called coin singing room which
>> The last place is a karaoke room. In South Korea, there is a place where you put a coin on a machine and then sing.
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