What is your favorite place in your house?
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My favorite place is my bedroom.
Beacause there is I sleeping room.
And there is an airconidioner.
I like my bedroom.
My bedroom is good.
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My favorite place is my bedroom.
Beacause there is I sleeping room.
And there is an airconidioner.
I like my bedroom.
My bedroom is good.
Beacause there is I sleeping room.
And there is an airconidioner.
I like my bedroom.
My bedroom is good.
>> My favorite place is my bedroom because it is sleeping room. And there is an air conditioner. I like my bedroom. My bedroom is good.
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