What is your favorite relaxing indoor activity?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to watch movie and play video game during my free time in my house.
In the past, I set monitor next to the TV to play game and watch TV at the same time.
강사 첨삭
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I like to watch movie and play video game during my free time in my house.
I like to watch movies and play video games at home during my free time.
In the past, I set monitor next to the TV to play game and watch TV at the same time.
In the past, I set up a monitor next to the TV so I could play games and watch TV at the same time.
I like to watch movies and play video games at home during my free time.
In the past, I set monitor next to the TV to play game and watch TV at the same time.
In the past, I set up a monitor next to the TV so I could play games and watch TV at the same time.
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