What is your favorite restaurant? What do you order there?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like Italian restaurants.
Hello Audrey, located in Gyeonggi-do Bundang, is a famous Italian restaurant.
It has delicious food and a beautiful garden.
I invited my friends there.
I usually eat pasta, fungi salad, and risotto.
If Donna comes to Gyeonggi-do Korea, it would visit this place.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
You have great taste in cuisine. Aside from your favorite Ethiopian coffee, you also like Western food.
I searched Hello Audrey on Google and found a beautiful facade and a glass share of the restaurant. Needless to say, the place is Instagram-worthy and the food is sumptuous. Thank you for the recommendation. I hope to visit this classy place someday soon.
Here on your composition, only the last sentence has a suggestion. Please compare the correct grammar pattern and use them correctly in your daily conversation. A job well done!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
Hello Audrey, located in Gyeonggi-do Bundang, is a famous Italian restaurant.
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
It has delicious food and a beautiful garden.
I invited my friends there.
>> Correct!
I usually eat pasta, fungi salad, and risotto.
If Donna comes to Gyeonggi-do Korea, it would visit this place.
>> ... If you go to Gyeonggi-do, Korea, it would be nice to visit this place.
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