What is your favorite restaurant? Why? Where? What kind of food?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I like a chicken. so when I am hungry, I order a few chicken near by the restaurant.
As you know, the chicken is very simple and delicious food. our family enjou them every weekend.
Near by my house, we have serveral kinds of the chicken restaurant as like BBQ, Maxican, Gubnae, Pericana and so on.
I like all of kind chicken. Boild chicken, spicy, sweet, with bulgogi source, roast ...
Do you like chicken Jasper? if so, you have to come to Korea. you can eat all kind of the chicken.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I hope my questions for your homework is better. Thank you for doing your homework. You did great. See you later in class. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
Dear [Name],
>> I like chickens so when I\'m hungry, I order a few chickens from nearby restaurants.
>> As you know, chickens are simple but delicious.
our family enjou them every weekend.
>> Our family enjoys them every weekend.
>> Near my house, we have several kinds of chicken restaurants like BBQ, Mexican, Gubnae, Pericana, and so on.
>> I like all kinds of chicken dishes; boiled, spicy, sweet, with bulgogi source, and roast chicken.
Do you like chicken Jasper? if so, you have to come to Korea.
>> CORRECT
you can eat all kind of the chicken.
>> You can eat different kinds of chicken dishes.
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