What is your favorite ride in an amusement park?
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My favorite ride in the amusement park ride is the Bumper cars.
And a merry-go-round.
And a Ferris-wheel.
And a Gyro-Drop for kids named Heanim-Dalnim.
And a monorail!
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Hi [이름]!
Happy Tuesday! Let\'s talk about toys again tomorrow ^^
T. DON
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What is your favorite ride in an amusement park?
My favorite ride in the amusement park ride is the Bumper cars.
>> My favorite ride in the amusement park is the Bumper cars.
And a merry-go-round. And a Ferris-wheel.And a Gyro-Drop for kids named Heanim-Dalnim. And a monorail!
>> I also like mery-go-round, ferris wheel, gyro-drop for kids which we call Heanim-Dalnim and of course the monorail.
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