What is your favorite room in your house? Why?

2024-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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Actually, my house don\'t have room where i can favorate. My house is not big. My house(I living in the weekdays) have one room, one living room and one rest room. So I like my desk. On the my desk, I can study English, I can watch the youtube, l can read a book. My desk even though not big, but I can do everything.

강사 첨삭

Hi Eva, 

Thank you for talking about your house and your favorite place! It sounds like your desk is a special spot where you can do many things you enjoy. I appreciate how you made the most out of the space you have. You\'re doing well, keep it up. 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Actually, my house don\'t have room where i can favorate.  

>>Actually, my house doesn\'t have a room that I particularly like. 

My house is not big.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>My house isn\'t large. 

My house(I living in the weekdays) have one room, one living room and one rest room.  

>>My house, where I live during the weekdays, has one bedroom, a living room, and a bathroom. 

So I like my desk.  

>>CORRECT 

OR>>So, I like my desk instead. 

On the my desk, I can study English, I can watch the youtube, l can read a book.  

>>On my desk, I can study English, I can watch YouTUbe, I can read a book. 

My desk even though not big, but I can do everything. 

>>Even though my desk isn\'t big, I can do everything there. 

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