What is your favorite room in your house? Why? (in 3-5 sentences)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s nice that you care a lot about your bond as a family. ^^
It\'s adorable whenever you joke about your wife.
I hope your bond with your family gets stronger each day. ^^
~~t. Ally
-------------------------------------
My favorite room in my house is our dining room.
>> CORRECT!
As it is connected to the kitchen and the living room as well, so it is the center of my family’s house life.
>> As it is connected to the kitchen and the living room as well, it is the center of my family’s house life.
I, just sitting on the dining chair, can see my wife((she is always lovely as long as she doesn’t talk) cooking or washing dishes in the kitchen and my children watching TV, reading books or just giggling in the living room.
>> I, by simply sitting on the dining chair, can see my wife (she is always lovely as long as she doesn’t talk) cooking or washing the dishes in the kitchen, and my children watching TV, reading books or just giggling in the living room.
And the most important reason is that there is a big window, through which we can see the tremendous landscape of Bundang Central Park.
>> CORRECT!
On weekends, we repeat gathering and scattering around the dining table.
>> CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.