What is Your Favorite Season?

2025-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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My favorite season is spring. Because spring is the warmest in the all seasons. During spring, I usually go to famous spot of cherry blossoms and I see that. I like to see cherry blossom. And then, I like go to picnic with my friends. And I think spring\'s mean is \'new start\'. I can see come in to flowers. When I see it, I think that \'I can do everything.\'. So spring is encouraging for me that reason why spring is special season for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi!

Jenna, you did a wonderful job on this homework! I can clearly see how much thought you put into describing spring. I love how you connected spring with new start and encouragement, that is such a beautiful way to express your feelings. Your ideas are very meaningful, and I can tell you are improving a lot in expressing yourself in English.
You also used some really nice words like encouraging and special season. That shows you are building strong vocabulary and using it well in your writing. Very impressive!
Just a little reminder: try to make your verb tenses consistent and smooth. For example, “I like to go on a picnic” instead of “I like go to picnic.” Keeping verbs in the right form will make your sentences sound even more natural.
I really like how you said spring makes you feel like you can do everything, that’s such a positive and powerful thought. Keep writing this way, Jenna! You are making great progress, and I’m so proud of how your English is growing. Keep shining!
~Teacher Cathy

My favorite season is spring. Because spring is the warmest in the all seasons.

>>My favorite season is spring because it is the warmest of all the seasons.

During spring, I usually go to famous spot of cherry blossoms and I see that.

>>During spring, I usually go to famous spots for cherry blossoms and enjoy the view.

I like to see cherry blossom. And then, I like go to picnic with my friends.

>>I like to see cherry blossoms. Then, I like to go on picnics with my friends.

And I think spring\'s mean is \'new start\'.

>>And I think the meaning of spring is a ‘new start.’

I can see come in to flowers. When I see it, I think that \'I can do everything.\'

>>I can see flowers coming into bloom. When I see them, I think, ‘I can do everything.’

So spring is encouraging for me that reason why spring is special season for me.

>>So spring is encouraging for me, and that is the reason why spring is a special season for me.

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