What is your favorite season and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like spring. I hate the cold.
I also don\'t like heavy and thick padding.
When winter passes and the weather gets warmer, I want to go outside.
I like hot, but I don\'t like summer. Because in the summer, there are many insects around us.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this, Ms. [Name]. Have a great day ahead!
I like spring.
>>> correct
I hate the cold.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I hate the cold weather.
I also don\'t like heavy and thick padding.
I also don\'t like heavy and thick padding.
>>> correct
When winter passes and the weather gets warmer, I want to go outside.
When winter passes and the weather gets warmer, I want to go outside.
>>> correct
I like hot, but I don\'t like summer.
I like hot, but I don\'t like summer.
>>> OR: I like the warm weather, but I don\'t like summer.
Because in the summer, there are many insects around us.
>>> correct
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