What is your favorite season and why?

2015-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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My favorite season is autumn.Because the weather is not cold and not hot.Spring is not hot but the dust storm makes the weather bad.The autumn is good when we enjoy outdoor activities such as playing soccer on the ground,go to a picnic.In the autumn the leaves colors are good too.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I like Autumn too! The weather is moderate, it\'s windy, and the falling leaves looks lovely.... Well, I like what you\'ve shared this time. Just check the alternative sentences below. Take care! See you tomorrow!   ~~T. Kris~~   My favorite season is autumn. >> correct OR: >> My favorite season is Autumn. OR: >> Autumn is the season that I like most. Because the weather is not cold and not hot. >> correct OR: >> For the reason that the weather is not too hot and not too cold. Spring is not hot but the dust storm makes the weather bad. >> correct OR: >> Spring is not hot but the dust in the wind makes the season bad. The autumn is good when we enjoy outdoor activities such as playing soccer on the ground,go to a picnic. DO YOU MEAN: >> The Autumn is good since we are enjoying outdoor activities such as playing soccer and going to a picnic. In the autumn the leaves colors are good too. >> correct OR: >> During Autumn, the color of the leaves are good too.

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