What is your favorite season and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite season is early winter. Because it\'s perfect weather to wear cardigans and jeans that are my favorite fashion style. Second, there is little insect and few odor. I really hate insets that always shows and I also hate bad smaller especially serious in summer.
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>> CORRECT.
Because it\'s perfect weather to wear cardigans and jeans that are my favorite fashion style.
>> Because it\'s the perfect weather to wear cardigans and jeans which are my favorite fashion styles.
Second, there is little insect and few odor.
>> Secondly, there are fewer insects and odor.
I really hate insets that always shows and I also hate bad smaller especially serious in summer.
>> I really hate insects that always show and I also hate the bad smell which is especially serious in summer.
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