What is your favorite season? why do you like it?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite season is spring. because it\'s warm and flutter day. I like to see cherry blossom. Spring is the beginning of the school or all of the life year. therefore, I think that new start or life. it is nice day so that we are outside to play and to smell flowers. if wind of pollen and fine dust weren\'t there, spring is happy season whoever. but, today spring term is very short. summer and winter terms are very long in korea. I\'m so sad. because, korea became worsen global warming. we must protect my earth.
강사 첨삭
Hello Clara!
What a nicely written composition. Thank you for sharing your ideas about the topic. Keep up the good work. See you later! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>My favorite season is spring because it\'s warm and petals flutter in the wind.
2. I like to see cherry blossom.
>>CORRECT!
3. Spring is the beginning of the school or all of the life year.
>>Spring is the beginning of new life and the start of school in Korea.
4. therefore, I think that new start or life.
>>Therefore, I think it is the symbol of new life and new beginnings.
5. it is nice day so that we are outside to play and to smell flowers.
>>If the weather is nice, we play outside and smell the flowers.
6. if wind of pollen and fine dust weren\'t there, spring is happy season whoever.
>>If pollen and fine dust were not present in the air, then spring would be a better season for anyone.
7. but, today spring term is very short. summer and winter terms are very long in korea.
>>But today, the spring season has become very short. Summer and winter seasons are very long in Korea.
8. I\'m so sad. because, korea became worsen global warming.
>> I\'m sad because the effects of global warming in Korea is becoming worse.
9. we must protect my earth.
>>CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.