What is your favorite season? Why? (in 3 sentences)

2018-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

학생이 쓴 원문

What is your favorite season? Why? (in 3 sentences) When I was young, in my twenties and thirties, I could tell so many reasons to love every season. I used to love the spring because of the fresh wind, bright green arising buds and charming cherry blossom, the summer because of the burning sun and sudden cooling showers, the autumn because of the beautiful mountains wearing the colorful clothes of so-called fall foliage, and the winter because of the lovely sound of stepping on the snow. For now, while too rainy spring, too hot summer and too cold winter had lost my love, the autumn still remains as my favorite season.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


This composition could actually be a literary piece.

I enjoyed reading it.

I wish the [이름]pines had all the four seasons too.

Thank you for giving me the opportunity to imagine the beauty of the different seasons through your words. ^^



~~t. Ally




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When I was young, in my twenties and thirties, I could tell so many reasons to love every season.

>> Back in my twenties to thirties, I could\'ve given so many reasons as to why I love every season.


 I used to love the spring because of the fresh wind, bright green arising buds and charming cherry blossom, the summer because of the burning sun and sudden cooling showers, the autumn because of the beautiful mountains wearing the colorful clothes of so-called fall foliage, and the winter because of the lovely sound of stepping on the snow.

>> I used to love the spring because of the fresh winds, bright green arising buds and the charming cherry blossoms, the summer because of the burning sun and the surprisingly cool showers, the autumn because of the beautiful mountains wearing their colorful clothes called fall foliage, and the winter because of the lovely sounds of stepping on the snow.


 For now, while too rainy spring, too hot summer and too cold winter had lost my love, the autumn still remains as my favorite season.

>> Now, the spring is too rainy, the summer is too hot and the winter is too cold, which is why I\'ve lost my love for them, but the autumn still remains as my favorite season.

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