What is your favorite social activity? Answer in a few sentences.

2022-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Donna

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I like cooking class because it’s physical activity which isn’t boring, and I can eat what I made.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Judy!

Cooking is a very exciting and sumptuous activity since it is meant to be shared with the people we love. It would be great preparing and consuming food altogether. This weekend, I hope that you can give your mother a hand preparing a meal as a means to bond and enjoy.

Thank you very much for this homework answer. It only needs an insertion of the article \'a\' to make the sentence even more meaningful.

Have a blast with the \'zombies\' this weekend!

-T. Donna =)

I like cooking class because it’s physical activity which isn’t boring, and I can eat what I made.
>> I like cooking class because it’s a physical activity which isn’t boring and I can eat what I made.

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