What is your favorite song and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite song is Butter and Seoul\'s aria.
Seoul\'s aria is my favorite LG TWINS\'s cheering song.
And Better is my favorite BTS song.
And Seoul\'s aria is in was slow in the bedinning,it\'s slow then faster.
Better and Seoul\'s aria is my favoite song.
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Seoul\'s aria is my favorite LG TWINS\'s cheering song.
And Better is my favorite BTS song.
And Seoul\'s aria is in was slow in the bedinning,it\'s slow then faster.
Better and Seoul\'s aria is my favoite song.
>> My favorite song is Butter and Seoul\'s aria.
Seoul\'s aria is my favorite LG TWINS\' cheering song and Butter is my favorite BTS song. Seoul\'s arias\' pacing is slow in the beginning, then it will become faster. Better and Seoul\'s aria are my favorite songs.
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