What is your favorite story and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite story is war story. Because I interested about war. So I read so many war books. And I like watching war story.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Aiden! That\'s interesting! War stories can teach us a lot about history, courage, and the sacrifices people made during difficult times. I find war stories very interesting, too, because many of them are based on real events.
-Teacher Sonny
My favorite story is war story. Because I interested about war.
>>My favorite type of story is war stories because I\'m interested in wars.
So I read so many war books.
>>So I read many books about wars.
And I like watching war story.
>>I like watching war movies, too.
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