What is your favorite story?(ANSWER)
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite story?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
My
favorite story is \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory.\'
I like Roald Dahi\'s story and books.
I like \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\' the most, and I like \'Esio Trot\'
secondly.
I think Roald Dahi\'s story is always fantastic!
(Oh, I like \'Fantastic Mr. [Name]\' too. I forgot \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\'
at the phone call. Sorry.)
.
CORRECTIONS:
My favorite story is \'Charlie\'s
Chocolate Factory.\'
I like Roald Dahi\'s stories and books.
I like \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\' the most, and I like \'Esio Trot\' second.
I think Roald Dahi\'s story is always fantastic!
(Oh, I like \'Fantastic Mr. [Name]\' too. I forgot \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\' on the phone call. Sorry.)
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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