What is your favorite story?(ANSWER)

2018-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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My favorite story is 'Charlie's Chocolate Factory.' I like Roald Dahi's story and books. I like 'Charlie's Chocolate Factory' the most, and I like 'Esio Trot' secondly. I think Roald Dahi's story is always fantastic! (Oh, I like 'Fantastic Mr. [Name]' too. I forgot 'Charlie's Chocolate Factory' at the phone call. Sorry.) -END-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What is your favorite story?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

 

My favorite story is \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory.\'
I like Roald Dahi\'s story and books.
I like \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\' the most, and I like \'Esio Trot\' secondly.
I think Roald Dahi\'s story is always fantastic!
(Oh, I like \'Fantastic Mr. [Name]\' too. I forgot \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\' at the phone call. Sorry.)

 

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CORRECTIONS:

 

My favorite story is \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory.\'
I like Roald Dahi\'s
stories and books.
I like \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\' the most, and I like \'Esio Trot\'
second.
I think Roald Dahi\'s story is always fantastic!
(Oh, I like \'Fantastic Mr. [Name]\' too. I forgot \'Charlie\'s Chocolate Factory\'
on the phone call. Sorry.)

 

 

               

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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