What is your favorite subject?
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First, my favorite subject is math because I can do math very well. For example, I got 100% on my mutiplication test so I got praised by my mom and my math teacher. Also I can do other calculations very well. Second, my favorite subject is science because I like the way that I do some fun experiments and learn the meaning of the experiments. If I learn new things and talk about them to my mom then she will be surpried. Third, the subject that I like is English. I like English bacuse talking with English and reading English books are fun. When I read English books and Korean books , English books are easy to read for me. That\'s why English is fun.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ellie~
Happy Parent\'s Day to your parents and have a good weekend!
See you next week~
>> My first favorite subject is Math, because I can do Math very well.
For example, I got 100% on my mutiplication test so I got praised by my mom and my math teacher.
>> For example, I got 100% on my multiplication test, so I got praised by my mom and my math teacher.
Also I can do other calculations very well.
>> Also, I can do other calculations as well.
Second, my favorite subject is science because I like the way that I do some fun experiments and learn the meaning of the experiments.
>> My second favorite subject is Science, because I like doing fun experiments and learning the importance of each experiment.
If I learn new things and talk about them to my mom then she will be surpried.
>> Whenever I share the new things that I have learned to my mom, she always gets surprised.
Third, the subject that I like is English.
>> My third favorite subject is English.
I like English bacuse talking with English and reading English books are fun.
>> I like English because speaking English and reading English books are fun.
When I read English books and Korean books , English books are easy to read for me.
>> When I read English books and Korean books, I find English books easier to read.
That\'s why English is fun.
>> CORRECT.
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