what is your favorite subject at school ? why ?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite subject is English. Because when I went to abroad, I learned about English. First, I felt It was so difficult. But gradually, my English skill was improve .Therefore, I am proud of me. Also, it was fun to learn about English.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sally!^^
It\'s great to know that you love to learn English. Let\'s enjoy while improving your skills more.😉
See you in class.
~Kelly^^
My favorite subject is English. >> Correct.
Because when I went to abroad, I learned about English.
>> Because when I went to abroad, I learned about English.
First, I felt It was so difficult.
>> At first, I felt that it was so difficult.
But gradually, my English skill was improve .
>> But gradually, my English skills improved.
Therefore, I am proud of me.
>> Therefore, I am proud of myself.
Also, it was fun to learn about English.
>> Also, it was fun to learn English.
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