What is your favorite subject to study in school? Why?

2021-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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I like major subjects more than basic science subjects. Especially, I like one about theory in new field in my major. I like to acquire new concept. More study the classes, more widely understand this field. I love my major, But I could not decide my job. So I want to know more jobs which I can choose. Environmental engineering which is my major has many load in the jobs. So I want to find some directions which is suitable for me. On the other hand, I like liberal arts theory subject like art, philosophy, writing and history. Even if my university\'s name is \'Seoul national university of science and technology\', It has some liberal arts major and many liberal arts classes. Because when I learn about that It is my first time, I can see other world. It is surprise. So my grade is higher than other engineering students.

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I like major subjects more than basic science subjects.

>>Correct.
 Especially, I like one about theory in new field in my major.

>>Especially, I like the one with theory in the new field of my major.
 I like to acquire new concept.

>>I would like to acquire a new concept.

More study the classes, more widely understand this field.

>>The more I study my classes in that major, the more I widely understand this field.
 I love my major, But I could not decide my job.

>>I love my major, but I could not decide what career to take.

So I want to know more jobs which I can choose.

>>So I want to know more about jobs which I can choose from.
 Environmental engineering which is my major has many load in the jobs.

>>My major is environmental engineering which has many opportunities in various jobs.
 So I want to find some directions which is suitable for me. 

>>So I need some suggestions which one is suitable for me.
 On the other hand, I like liberal arts theory subject like art, philosophy, writing and history.

>>On the other hand, I like liberal arts\' subjects such as art, philosophy, writing, and history.
 Even if my university\'s name is \'Seoul national university of science and technology\', It has some liberal arts major and many liberal arts classes.

>>My university, Seoul National University of Science and Technology has some major subjects and classes of liberal arts.
 Because when I learn about that It is my first time, I can see other world.

>>When I learned about those subjects for the first time, I could understand the world.

It is surprise.

>>I was astonished and got interested studying.
 So my grade is higher than other engineering students.

>>So my grade was higher than other engineering students.

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