What is your favorite summer vacation?

2022-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

It\'s definitely going Water park. I feel the truth so bad these days because it\'s too hot and humid. But in the Water park there are not only cool water but exciting facility.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


It\'s definitely going Water park. 

>> It\'s definitely going to the Water Park. 

I feel the truth so bad these days because it\'s too hot and humid. 

>> I feel the truth of summer so bad these days because it\'s too hot and humid. 

But in the Water park there are not only cool water but exciting facility.

>> But at the Water Park, there are not only cool water but it also has an exciting facility.

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