What is your favorite thing to do as a family?(ANSWER)
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Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite thing to do as a family?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
My favorite things to do as a family is talking about
stress, and watching TV together.
I usually talk about what happend at school almost everyday.
And my family always listen to me.
Also my parents tell me about what happened in their busness.
And I always listen to them.
After dinner, our family all get together and watch TV.
Our favorite programs are almost same, so our family don\'t foght with the
TV programs.
I like to play with my family. :)
CORRECTIONS:
My favorite things to do as a family are talking about stress, and
watching TV together.
I usually talk about what happened at school almost every day.
And my family always listen to me.
Also, my parents tell me about
what happened in their business.
And I always listen to them.
After dinner, our family get together and watch TV.
Our favorite programs are almost same, so our family don\'t fight with the TV programs.
I like to play with my family. :)
** Dear [이름], thank you once again for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Be with you in our class. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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