What is your favorite thing to do as a family? Please answer in complete sentences.

2018-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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My favorite thing to do as a family are love and trust. because when you love each other you need trust to them and believe them.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What is your favorite thing to do as a family?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

 My favorite thing to do as a family are love and trust. because when you love each other you need trust to them and believe them.

             

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

My favorite thing to do as a family is watching a movie. Watching a movie with your family while laughing together and eating some snacks together is one of the best memories one can have with a family.

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. In your homework, I wrote a totally different answer because yours was not connected to the question at all. So, I have written down a sample answer for you.   Please take note of it. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

 

 

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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