What is your favorite thing to watch on your phone or computer? and why so, if none why?
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my favoriite thing to play game on my computer. When I play computer games, time passes quickly.
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my favoriite thing to play game on my computer.
>> My favorite thing to do with my computer is to play games on it.
When I play computer games, time passes quickly.
>> I really enjoy it because whenever I play, time passes quickly.
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