What is your favorite time of the day?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite time is after 10 or 11 pm when my daughter falls asleep at night. At that time I can have me-time. During the time, I usually watch some dramas on Netflix, some lectures for studying English and contents with popular singers or cats on YouTube.
강사 첨삭
My favorite time is after 10 or 11 pm when my daughter falls asleep at night.
>> Correct :D
At that time I can have me-time.
>> Correct :D
During the time, I usually watch some dramas on Netflix, some lectures for studying English and contents with popular singers or cats on YouTube.
>> During that time, I usually watch some dramas on Netflix or lectures about studying English and contents with popular singers or cats on YouTube.
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