What is your favorite toy and why?
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My favorite toy is Go, Orgen ,Chess,Pokemon figures,Shark island,Pirate Ahjushi.
Go, Orgen and Chess is funny.
And Pokemon figures are amaging.
And a Shark island is interesting.
And Pirate Ahjushi is enteraining.
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HOMEWORK:
What is your favorite toy and why?
My favorite toy is Go, Orgen ,Chess,Pokemon figures,Shark island,Pirate Ahjushi.
>> My favorite toy is Go, Orgen, playing chess, Pokemon figures, Shark island and Pirate Ahjushi.
Go, Orgen and Chess is funny.
>> Go, Orgen and playing chess is funny.
And Pokemon figures are amaging.
>> And Pokemon figures are amazing.
And a Shark island is interesting. And Pirate Ahjushi is enteraining.
>> Shark Island is interesting and Pirate Ahjushi is entertaining.
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