What is your favorite water activity?
학생이 쓴 원문
Swimming is my favorite activity in the every water activities.
I learened swimming for a four to five years when I was thirty years old.
I believe that fitness is boring but swimming is a funny sports.
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Swimming is my favorite activity in the every water activities.
>> Swimming is my favorite of all water activities.
I learened swimming for a four to five years when I was thirty years old.
>> I learned to swim for four to five years when I was thirty years old.
I believe that fitness is boring but swimming is a funny sports.
>> I find fitness routines boring, but swimming is a fun sport.
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