What is your favorite way to relax on your day off?
학생이 쓴 원문
when I day off, I usually clean my home.
Recently I concerned about minimal life.
Minimal life means leaving only need thing.
After clean my home, I watch the youtube.
Especially I like animal videos.
강사 첨삭
That sounds relaxing, [이름]!
A clean home always makes me feel better. I like the idea of living a simpler life too. Animal videos are always fun to watch!
- Kristine ^^
when I day off, I usually clean my home.
>> I usually spend my days off cleaning my home.
Recently I concerned about minimal life.
Recently I concerned about minimal life.
>> Recently, I\'ve been trying to live a more minimalist life.
Minimal life means leaving only need thing.
Minimal life means leaving only need thing.
>> Minimalism means keeping only the things you need.
After clean my home, I watch the youtube.
After clean my home, I watch the youtube.
>> After cleaning my home, I watch YouTube.
Especially I like animal videos.
Especially I like animal videos.
>> I especially enjoy watching animal videos.
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