What is your general view about work? Why?
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What is your general view about work? Why?
When it comes to work itself, it can be a bless that gives us the energy of our life.
>>When it comes to work in general, it can be a blessing that gives us the energy to live.
If we should work for food or money, our life is miserable.
>>If we should work for food or money, our life will be miserable.
I want to regard it as a reward for meaning of life.
>>I want to regard it as a reward and as part of the meaning of life.
If we don\'t have work, our life is getting very poor and boring.
>>If we don\'t work, our life will be boring and in a very poor state.
People shoud keep working appropriately for our need which is beyond our basic essential desires.
>>People should keep working appropriately for their needs which is beyond our basic essential needs.
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