What is your goal in life?
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My goal in life is earning ten millions of dollars. My parents said that people should have a big dream. Also, it is not the impossible goal. So my goal is earning ten millions of dollars.
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My goal in life is earning ten millions of dollars.
>> My goal in life is to earn tens of millions of dollars.
My parents said that people should have a big dream.
>> My parents said that people should have a big dream.
>> or: My parents have always taught me to dream big.
Also, it is not the impossible goal.
>> Also, it is not an impossible goal.
>> or: Also, this is an achievable goal.
>> or: Also, this is a doable aim.
So my goal is earning ten millions of dollars.
>> So my goal is to earn tens of millions of dollars.
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