What is your goal in life?

Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. [이름]tina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

The goal of my life is to be a happy person.

>> My goal in life is to be a happy person.
I have no greed for money.

>> CORRECT!
I hope only health with our family and friend.

>> I hope only for good health for our families and friends.
and then I always keep positive think all of the thing remain my life.

>> Then I always keep and will keep a positive thought all through out the remaining of my life.