What is your greatest accomplishment as of today?
학생이 쓴 원문
Today morning the weather was very whimsical. It was windy and cold for doing outdoor sport.
I have a tennis lesson every Monday and Thursday morning. Even though I am enthusiastic about excercise, I hesitated to go to the tennis court by walking because of the weather. However, I did it. I walked for 15 minutes and played tennis with my coach.
Virtually, there were many people who were playing tennis. While I was coming home, I stop at starbucks to have a cup of coffee.
I was very satisfied with starting of worthful day.
강사 첨삭
Good evening once again Young Won!
Accomplishing a lot within a day is absolutely a choice. Sometimes we feel inspired and just keep pushing. We can be tired but we do not stop because some people depend on our energy.
Thank you for accomplishing to write this composition. Definitely, your day has been truly fulfilling.
See you soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
I have a tennis lesson every Monday and Thursday morning. Even though I am enthusiastic about excercise, I hesitated to go to the tennis court by walking because of the weather. However, I did it. I walked for 15 minutes and played tennis with my coach.
>> Correct!
Or: I have a tennis lessons every Monday and Thursday morning. Even though I am enthusiastic about exercising, I hesitated to go to the tennis court by walking because of the weather. However, I did it. I walked for 15 minutes and played tennis with my coach.
Virtually, there were many people who were playing tennis. While I was coming home, I stop at starbucks to have a cup of coffee.
Virtually, there were many people who were playing tennis. While I was coming home, I stop at starbucks to have a cup of coffee.
>> Virtually, there were many people who were playing tennis. While I was coming home, I stopped at Starbucks to have a cup of coffee.
I was very satisfied with starting of worthful day.
>> I was satisfied with the start of a worthful day.
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