What is your greatest accomplishment so far

Hi [이름]!

I must say that you were born to be an athlete.^^ I really admire you for that. Keep up the good work and just enjoy what you do best! See you in class.

~Kelly^^

My greatest accomplishment is when I won a lot of medals in track and field.

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I was track and field player for around 8 years and have been enjoying working out.

>> I was a track and field player for around 8 years and have been enjoying working out.

I start that from when I was 10 years old because my physical education teacher recommended being a track and field player.
>> I started when I was 10 years old because my physical education teacher recommended me to become a track and field player.

At first, I had no idea about that, so I thought it was so hard and difficult to win medals.

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However, because I like exercising, I enjoyed training and could win medals.

>> However, because I like exercising, I enjoyed training and winning medals.

I can\'t forget when I won medals in front of many people and they gave me a big hand.

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Then, I felt a sense of accomplishment.

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Even though I stop being track and field player, it helped me choose my major in university.

>> Even though I stopped being a track and field player, it helped me to choose my major in university.

I know I have an aptitude for sports, so I will get job that is related to sports.

>> I know I have an aptitude for sports, so I will get a job that is related to it.