What is your greatest fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
My greatest fear is time. When my free time is reduced, I feel poor. I want to manage my free time on my own well because my free time will fry fast in a wink. After my daughter goes to bed, I usually spend time cleaning out in the kitchen, rooms right away because I want to make more time for myself. During my free time, I\'m struggling to improve my English because one of my big obstacles is language. When I don\'t communicate with people well in English, I\'m very frustrated. Also, I have counseling biweekly. I want to know who I am. When I know about myself, I can keep a good relationship with people and my life will be ample. I want to stop negative thoughts in my life. It wastes my free time. Despite not having ample time to do what I want, I try to keep a positive mindset, thinking. I don\'t want to be overwhelmed by my environment. If the surrounding environment overwhelms me, I hope I have good energy and be influential to daughter. My free time makes me a better person. Thanks!
강사 첨삭
I hope you discover more about yourself, Jane! Giving yourself time is the best reward for yourself!-Faith-
My greatest fear is time. >> CORRECT
When my free time is reduced, I feel poor.
>> CORRECT
OR I feel sorry for myself when I don\'t have enough leisure time.
I want to manage my free time on my own well because my free time will fry fast in a wink.
>> I want to manage my free time on my own well because my free time will fly fast in a wink.
After my daughter goes to bed, I usually spend time cleaning out in the kitchen, rooms right away because I want to make more time for myself.
>> After my daughter goes to bed, I usually spend time cleaning out the kitchen and rooms right away because I want to make more time for myself.
During my free time, I\'m struggling to improve my English because one of my big obstacles is language.
>> During my free time, I struggle to improve my English because one of my big obstacles is language.
When I don\'t communicate with people well in English, I\'m very frustrated.
>> When I can\'t communicate with people well in English, I\'m very frustrated.
Also, I have counseling biweekly.
>> CORRECT
I want to know who I am.
>> CORRECT
OR It\'s about knowing myself more.
When I know about myself, I can keep a good relationship with people and my life will be ample.
>> When I know about myself more, I can keep a good relationship with people and my life will be ample.
I want to stop negative thoughts in my life.
>> CORRECT
OR I don\'t want to be optimistic in life.
It wastes my free time.
>> CORRECT
Despite not having ample time to do what I want, I try to keep a positive mindset, thinking.
>> Despite not having ample time to do what I want, I try to keep a positive mindset and thinking.
I don\'t want to be overwhelmed by my environment.
>> CORRECT
If the surrounding environment overwhelms me, I hope I have good energy and be influential to daughter.
>> If my surrounding overwhelms me, I hope I have good energy and be influential to my daughter.
My free time makes me a better person.
>> CORRECT
OR My free time helps me become the better version of myself.
Thanks!
>> CORRECT
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