What is your greatest fear?

What is your greatest fear? It is so philosophical question when I think of that. haha There are many things make me fear around us. above all, I think many people worry that all of people are to be old. I also afraid it. as we will become old age, we must have faced the death. This fact makes us so gloomy. Moreover, I worried that I would fail to succeed full time employment. Most people don’t have chance to get a job they really want to in Korea.

Hi Sam! Thank you for sending this over. ^^ I also fear death. But I guess all of us, will come to an end. That is why I always say to myself, \"I have to do all the things I wish to do as long as I live. So whenever my time is over, I won\'t have regrets.\" ^^ Nice composition, Sam!^^ Kindly go over the corrections I made for your work. Enjoy your weekend! Good night! ~ Teacher Alice What is your greatest fear? It is so philosophical question when I think of that. haha >> Correct!There are many things make me fear around us. >> There are many things around us that make me fear.above all, I think many people worry that all of people are to be old. >> Above all, I think many people worry about getting old.I also afraid it. >> I am also afraid of that. as we will become old age, we must have faced the death. >> As we will get older, we all must face death.This fact makes us so gloomy. >> Correct!Moreover, I worried that I would fail to succeed full time employment.>> Moreover, I worry about failing to succeed to a full time employment.Most people don’t have chance to get a job they really want to in Korea. >> Most people don\'t have the chance to get a job they really want in Korea.