what is your greatest fear?

2013-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi! Alice. I am really look forward to talk with you again. I'm so sorry about last Tuesday. we had a get-together last Tuesday in my workplace. I guess that you already know about "Korean get-together culture". I'd like to talk to you many things. I wonder that how have you been doing. ^^ I have much to say with you!! Oh my god!! homework.. haha. My greatest fear is desease.!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Hahaha! I have missed you so much! Well me too! I have so much to tell! So please..... Catch my call tomorrow. :) See you [이름]! ~Teacher Alice Hi! Alice.>> Hi Alice. >> OR: Hi Alice!I am really look forward to talk with you again.>> I really look forward to talk with you again.I\'m so sorry about last Tuesday.>> Correct!we had a get-together last Tuesday in my workplace.>>  We had a get-together last Tuesday in my workplace.I guess that you already know about \"Korean get-together culture\".>> OR: I guess you already know about \"Korean get-together culture\"I\'d like to talk to you many things.>> I\'d like to talk to you about many things. >> OR: I\'d like to tell you many things.I wonder that how have you been doing. ^^>> I winder how you have been doing. I have much to say with you!!>> I have so much to say to you!!! Oh my god!! homework.. haha. >> Correct! *Hahaha!My greatest fear is desease.! >> My greatest fear is death! >> OR: My greatest fear is to decease!

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