what is your greatest fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! Alice.
I am really look forward to talk with you again.
I'm so sorry about last Tuesday.
we had a get-together last Tuesday in my workplace.
I guess that you already know about "Korean get-together culture".
I'd like to talk to you many things.
I wonder that how have you been doing. ^^
I have much to say with you!!
Oh my god!! homework.. haha.
My greatest fear is desease.!
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Hahaha! I have missed you so much!
Well me too! I have so much to tell! So please.....
Catch my call tomorrow. :)
See you [이름]!
~Teacher Alice
Hi! Alice.>> Hi Alice.
>> OR: Hi Alice!I am really look forward to talk with you again.>> I really look forward to talk with you again.I\'m so sorry about last Tuesday.>> Correct!we had a get-together last Tuesday in my workplace.>> We had a get-together last Tuesday in my workplace.I guess that you already know about \"Korean get-together culture\".>> OR: I guess you already know about \"Korean get-together culture\"I\'d like to talk to you many things.>> I\'d like to talk to you about many things.
>> OR: I\'d like to tell you many things.I wonder that how have you been doing. ^^>> I winder how you have been doing. I have much to say with you!!>> I have so much to say to you!!! Oh my god!! homework.. haha.
>> Correct! *Hahaha!My greatest fear is desease.!
>> My greatest fear is death!
>> OR: My greatest fear is to decease!
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