What is your greatest fear?

2017-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Travis

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It depends on the situation and values what I put. As I divided into two types which is reality or not the greatest fear in reality is to see any kind of bugs. Many kinds of the bugs are waking up because the heat and humidity is getting more warm as spring and summer is coming. These days I used to find out some bugs that appeared under the bed or paper boxes in my room. I really hate seeing them which have more than 40 legs or killing them through my chemical spray. Sometimes they even have useful wings to avoid my spray spreading out. I feel scary to witness some scene while they are trying to save their life. Secondly The greatest fear not reality is my future at work place. I don’t know how my career would be working out from now on because I don’t even know my transfer to head quarter and I am in charge of international cooperation now. For these reasons I am having some fears about seeing bugs appeared in my room and thinking of my work.

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It depends on the situation and values what I put.
>>It depends on the situation that I\'m facing.
As I divided into two types which is reality or not the greatest fear in reality is to see any kind of bugs.
>>I was divided into two personality, the reality, my greatest fear is too see any kind of bugs.
Many kinds of the bugs are waking up because the heat and humidity is getting more warm as spring and summer is coming.
>>Many kinds of bugs wakes up because the heat and humidity is increasing when spring and summer is coming.
These days I used to find out some bugs that appeared under the bed or paper boxes in my room.
>>These days, I found some bugs that appeared under my bed or boxes in my room.
I really hate seeing them which have more than 40 legs or killing them through my chemical spray.
>>I really hate seeing them which they may have 40 legs or killing them through my insecticide.
Sometimes they even have useful wings to avoid my spray spreading out.
>>Sometimes they even use their wings to avoid my spray.
I feel scary to witness some scene while they are trying to save their life.
>>I feel scared to witness them so try and save their life.
Secondly The greatest fear not reality is my future at work place.
>>My second greatest fear is my future in my work.
I don’t know how my career would be working out from now on because I don’t even know my transfer to head quarter and I am in charge of international cooperation now.
>>Correct.
 For these reasons I am having some fears about seeing bugs appeared in my room and thinking of my work.

>>Correct.

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