What is your greatest fear?
학생이 쓴 원문
Please check your homework below (Answer the questions into 2-3 sentences only.)
>> What is your greatest fear?
Stop, quitter and lazy When I’m doing something. When I was young, I don’t care about this act. In addition I usually was that.
However i have a lot of responsible what I did something. I tried to overcome those fear.
It was hard for me and no pain no gain.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Yeong ^^
Please check your corrections below :)
Thank you ^^
Stop, quitter and lazy When I’m doing something. When I was young, I don’t care about this act.
>> My greatest fear are to be a quitter and lazy. When I was young, I don’t care about this attitude.
In addition I usually was that. However i have a lot of responsible what I did something. I tried to overcome those fear.
>> In addition to that I used to be like that before. However, I have a lot of responsibility to do. So I tried to overcome those fears.
It was hard for me and no pain no gain.
>> It was hard for me, but I overcome it and they no pain no gain.
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